Friday, October 7, 2011

Essay Hook

            The ESRB have a tendency to be hated by me, and likely, many other kids. They put age limits on video games making parents not buy them because of their ratings, and making kids unable to buy them on their own. I can’t stand them, as they have ruined my chances of getting the best new war games available.

2 comments:

  1. You have a definite stance on this topic, and your word choice ("hated," "can't stand") gives clear voice to your opinion. You certainly know who you do and do not like!

    If you were to continue this, consider an additional question you could answer, such as how you might go about getting the age limits changed, or how the ESRB could be convinced to remove the limits entirely. You could even explore why the ESRB finds it necessary to create those limits in the first place. Just a possibility!

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